Page 1 of 2 12>
New Reply
Topic Options
#18175 - 11/27/07 06:52 PM Please view my stories!!!! : )
Ylime Offline
stranger


Registered: 11/26/07
Posts: 6
Please view and send feedback about my stories. The stories are Departure Day & Life goes on under poetry and The Horror Hour under Ghost stories. All of these are by Me (Y-lime).
Top Reply Reply Quote Quote Quick Reply Quick Reply Quick Quote Quick Quote
#18177 - 11/28/07 07:56 AM Re: Please view my stories!!!! : ) [Re: Ylime]
Ylime Offline
stranger


Registered: 11/26/07
Posts: 6
Their really good!!!!
Top Reply Reply Quote Quote Quick Reply Quick Reply Quick Quote Quick Quote
#18188 - 11/30/07 01:39 PM Re: Please view my stories!!!! : ) [Re: Ylime]
Anonymous
Unregistered



I have read your stories; now that I have read your stories, what would you like to know?
Top Reply Reply Quote Quote Quick Reply Quick Reply Quick Quote Quick Quote
#18193 - 12/01/07 06:55 PM Re: Please view my stories!!!! : ) [Re: Anonymous]
Ylime Offline
stranger


Registered: 11/26/07
Posts: 6
Are they any good,what could I do to write better,and what are all your thoughts and opinions.
Top Reply Reply Quote Quote Quick Reply Quick Reply Quick Quote Quick Quote
#18197 - 12/03/07 02:38 PM Re: Please view my stories!!!! : ) [Re: Anonymous]
Anonymous
Unregistered



1st need to know how old you are and what kind of stuff you ultimately want to write. Whom have you read, etc.?
Top Reply Reply Quote Quote Quick Reply Quick Reply Quick Quote Quick Quote
#18209 - 12/07/07 05:53 AM Re: Please view my stories!!!! : ) [Re: Anonymous]
Nathanielm Offline
stranger


Registered: 07/21/07
Posts: 16
Sounds like he/she are young... \:\)
Top Reply Reply Quote Quote Quick Reply Quick Reply Quick Quote Quick Quote
#18214 - 12/07/07 02:58 PM Re: Please view my stories!!!! : ) [Re: Nathanielm]
Ylime Offline
stranger


Registered: 11/26/07
Posts: 6
I like to write anything really and I have read some of Lori's stories.

Edited by Ylime (12/07/07 02:59 PM)

Top Reply Reply Quote Quote Quick Reply Quick Reply Quick Quote Quick Quote
#18215 - 12/08/07 02:57 AM Re: Please view my stories!!!! : ) [Re: Ylime]
Nathanielm Offline
stranger


Registered: 07/21/07
Posts: 16
yes, lori is a hell of an author, and she always has some really good stories.

\:\)

I write science fiction and fantasy, I edit some erotica too... ultimately which is more adult oriente and have written only one piece... Mine was tame compared to the others.

Compared to that site, nicestories is a cakewalk for great grammer and writing ability. they are notorious for horrible grammer and spelling. EEEK!

Nathaniel --




LOL!

Top Reply Reply Quote Quote Quick Reply Quick Reply Quick Quote Quick Quote
#18223 - 12/11/07 08:02 AM Re: Please view my stories!!!! : ) [Re: Ylime]
lori32wf Offline
enthusiast


Registered: 11/18/02
Posts: 316
Loc: Louisiana
Ylime, sorry I've been missing in action. I hardly ever check the forums anymore. Thank you for reading my stories and for liking them too :). I'll be reading yours today.
_________________________
By losing you I not only lost love, I also lost my best friend. Don't know which hurts worse.

Top Reply Reply Quote Quote Quick Reply Quick Reply Quick Quote Quick Quote
#18224 - 12/11/07 08:06 AM Re: Please view my stories!!!! : ) [Re: Nathanielm]
lori32wf Offline
enthusiast


Registered: 11/18/02
Posts: 316
Loc: Louisiana
Nathaniel, I'm shocked ! Thanks for the compliment :).

As everyone knows I stick with mostly romantic stories and poems. I've ventured out a few times, but always come back to what I know. I've also written some erotica, find it easier to write sometimes. Though those type of stories come in bits and pieces.

Thanks again Nathaniel!
_________________________
By losing you I not only lost love, I also lost my best friend. Don't know which hurts worse.

Top Reply Reply Quote Quote Quick Reply Quick Reply Quick Quote Quick Quote
Page 1 of 2 12>

Quick Reply:
HTML is disabled
UBBCode is enabled

Image Verification. Type the 6 letters or numbers. Letters are not case-sensitive. Click the image to request a new one.


Moderator:  art, red1hols 
Hop to: