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#44260 - 12/18/09 09:41 AM Re: Stroke it NOW... or Slow Character Build... [Re: CharmBrights]
holdmedownnow holdmedownnow stranger Registered: 12/17/09 Posts: 7 Loc: Essex, UK	girlie 1980, my author name is sexcetera, have a look and see if you like it $\:\)$ i've only got one on here at the mo, working on others. charmbrights, thank you, its a bit nerve racking speaking on forums for the first time! x _________________________ whatever i write is just what i am thinking, please don't take offence as none is intended x
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#44266 - 12/18/09 10:56 AM Re: Stroke it NOW... or Slow Character Build... [Re: CharmBrights]
Jake Jake addict Registered: 02/27/01 Posts: 592 Loc: Northeastern US	I tend to write longer stuff these days. Even when I plan on something short, or a "stroke" story it doesn't usually come out that way, or there is a lot of story before you get to the stroke part. I want to know WHY a character does something, especially if it's something outrageous. When a writer describes their female lead as conservative and then has her blowing a guy who's not her husband half a page later it's silly and pulls me right out of the story. I like first person when it's done well. I'm not trying to project myself into the story so it doesn't bother me if it's a first person female story. I like reading what she's thinking. or reading what is going through a husband's head during a swinging experience. _________________________ Website: Jake's Wonderland Twitter: JakeMarlowWrtr
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#44269 - 12/18/09 11:07 AM Re: Stroke it NOW... or Slow Character Build... [Re: CharmBrights]
Old_Mike Old_Mike enthusiast Registered: 02/26/08 Posts: 217 Loc: Pa	So, girlie, when are you going to write that story for the rest of us to enjoy? _________________________ Old and part of the CRS club Mike
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#44270 - 12/18/09 12:21 PM Re: Stroke it NOW... or Slow Character Build... [Re: Jake]
Hunterguy Hunterguy member Registered: 01/21/09 Posts: 166	Originally Posted By: Jake I want to know WHY a character does something, especially if it's something outrageous. When a writer describes their female lead as conservative and then has her blowing a guy who's not her husband half a page later it's silly and pulls me right out of the story. So are you simply making a statement, expressing your frustration, indicating that you would prefer to have the author either provide some build up, or subsequent explanation for those actions? I suspect that is why you find yourself writing more story before the sex, than you used too. Or are you actually looking for a plausible explanation? Edited by Hunterguy (12/18/09 12:22 PM)
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#44285 - 12/20/09 11:46 PM Re: Stroke it NOW... or Slow Character Build... [Re: Hunterguy]
Jake Jake addict Registered: 02/27/01 Posts: 592 Loc: Northeastern US	Well, "plausible" is relative in most erotic stories. I'm willing to suspend my disbelief if the writer makes some stab at explaining a character's actions. And what I described is what I prefer to read and it is generally what I write. There usually is some story wrapped around my sex scenes, even if the story is far fetched. _________________________ Website: Jake's Wonderland Twitter: JakeMarlowWrtr
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