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#40237 - 02/17/09 11:06 PM Outdoor Angie: Looking For Input
RumpleForeskin Offline
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Registered: 01/29/09
Posts: 3
Loc: Texas
I come seeking feedback from my fellow scribblers for:

title: OUTDOOR ANGIE'S WATERFALL WOES (humor)

url: (URLs in posts not allowed)

name: Rumple Foreskin

questions:
1. Is it funny?
2. Is there too little/too much sex?
3. How can it be improved?
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#40763 - 03/19/09 07:59 AM Re: Outdoor Angie: Looking For Input [Re: RumpleForeskin]
Anonymous
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In the immortal words of the late Gilda Radner's, Miss Emily Latella, "Never mind." I've pulled the three "Angie" stories. Few votes, fewer comments, nothing here, why bother?
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