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#37360 - 10/03/08 08:10 AM Re: Sins I have commited [Re: jillerotica]
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 Originally Posted By: jillerotica
Good point CharmBrights.
Unfortunately some would-be stroke-stories are so boring that you need to get up for a coffee half-way through to stay awake LOL
Some authors should have the words: "Cut to the chase" pinned to their PC.:)
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Author Name - Jillbaby


Are you suggesting that some readers stroke themselves when reading our little stories ... OMG ... I'd never thought of that.

I consider myself a writer of 'erotica' rather than 'stroke stories'.

On a personal level I find many stories to be dull simply because they follow the same tired and trusted storylines, with the same barely sketched characters and using the same old cliched language. I want a story that absorbs me, drags me into its core and makes me feel what the participants feel.

There are some great writers on here who write 'taut' stories and equally wonderful ones who swirl you around in layer after layer of description ... 'cutting to the chase' doesn't always make for great storytelling (especially when that 'chase' has been told so many times before).
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#37533 - 10/07/08 03:24 PM Re: Sins I have commited [Re: cumgirl]
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I think it is good there are both straight to the point fuckind and sucking stories and more and longer romantic ones. Depends on how I feel that day. Do I want a long drawn out masturbation session where I bring myself close to cumming a couple of times then back off? Or is it one of those days I just need to blow a hard shot out and be down with it? Or how dirty do I feel that day \:\) Just my 2 cents! I love all the variety on this site!

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#37583 - 10/07/08 11:02 PM Re: Sins I have commited [Re: DarkHorse]
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naming characters too closely and then mixing them up...

You know, Jenny, Jenna, & Gina

But when I have said that Jenny wasn't around and it was Gina and Jenna getting it on and then come back and say how Jenny moaned as Gina licked her...

Okay I've only ever done that once but it's such a pet peeve I had to throw it in here. This one thing has the ability to make me close out of a story half way through.

... I do promise to never write while I am obsessively horny. I end up rushing the story lines to get to the big bang...
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#37680 - 10/09/08 03:59 AM Re: Sins I have commited [Re: JayLynn]
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JayLynn

Have you read any of my Stories, I write under the same name I use here...On ES in the gay section
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#37682 - 10/09/08 06:35 AM Re: Sins I have commited [Re: indulger2005]
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 Originally Posted By: indulger2005
JayLynn

Have you read any of my Stories, I write under the same name I use here...On ES in the gay section


I have not. I will check them out tonight when I get off... er I mean when I come home...
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#37837 - 10/10/08 10:59 PM Re: Sins I have commited [Re: DarkHorse]
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use "throat" instead of "neck."
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#42450 - 09/24/09 03:17 PM Re: Sins I have commited [Re: cumgirl]
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 Originally Posted By: cumgirl
I want a story that absorbs me, drags me into its core and makes me feel what the participants feel.


Yep! I know this is a thread for writers, and I do not write at all, but wanted to say that this is what I want to read. It has to really pull me in. And a very wide range of styles of story can do that. There is no correct length or degree of detail.

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#46168 - 06/25/10 08:51 AM Re: Sins I have commited [Re: Girlie1980]
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Starting stories without an ending in mind, or writing the ending before I've determined how a story should begin!

[ GUILTY! )

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#46985 - 11/13/10 10:57 PM Re: Sins I have commited [Re: Ryan]
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Personally, i think art covered it pretty well when he thought of the website name.

Strokestories.com

lol....

The definition of erotic can be anything from the subtle discription of a cleavage nestling behind a low cut jumper to full mind blowing sex.

As a writer, the temptation is there to write stories that totally omit logic or history, stories that basically get to the point. but like writers, the readers all have different preferences when it comes to what they find arousing.

for some if it is descriptive and vulgar and heats up as quick as they do, it's a winner. but let us not forget the people who like to preheat their brain before they heat the oven.

As a reader, i've started reading numerous stories where i've not even made it past the fourth paragraph before clicking back to the story board.

"my wife stood before me in red stockings and suspenders, ready for her aching cunt to be stuffed with my hard cock"

And that sort of thing came in during the second paragraph. in chef's speak, one would define that as a ready made meal in seconds.

The authors i truly admire and there are a few of them, are the ones who arouse my intellect and imagination as well as my manhood.

The author who gives me a story that i find easy to believe, an author who gives me a little sight into themselves, how they tick, what sex means to them.....etc.

The visual aspect of sex, i can make up myself, but for me, arousal is not only based on the size of her glands, but also on what i know of the character too.

The point being, we all approach the stories on this site from our own unique perspective. that is why when readers have e-mailed me in the past and made it clear that they expected a stroke story, i've made it clear that the site is called "erotic stories" and not stroke stories.com.

While i admire some of the better stroke stories on this site an the authors who post them. i'm fairly happy with what i produce. and it seems that so are some of the readers.

if i get the priviledge of knowing that one person truly enjoyed a story posted then the writing process was all worthwhile.

To me, it doesn't matter what form the story takes or who the author is.

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